Nice topic, you should mention in your article that it is inappropriate to holler at the top of your lungs during the actual movie. It is annoying and no one cares if you think Spider Man's girlfriend is "ugly as a horse"...poor Kirsten Dunst. Anyway... 1)You should focus on spelling, grammar (1), you should focus on references (2), keeping the article on topic (4), and avoid using "Jargony" words(7). 2) I expect some information on what makes this topic exciting? Why are you posting about this? More then just personal experiences but maybe things you can EXPECT to see. 3) I would also like to see a vague history of this midnight showing. Maybe including when it started. (whew)
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Nice topic, you should mention in your article that it is inappropriate to holler at the top of your lungs during the actual movie. It is annoying and no one cares if you think Spider Man's girlfriend is "ugly as a horse"...poor Kirsten Dunst. Anyway...
1)You should focus on spelling, grammar (1), you should focus on references (2), keeping the article on topic (4), and avoid using "Jargony" words(7).
2) I expect some information on what makes this topic exciting? Why are you posting about this? More then just personal experiences but maybe things you can EXPECT to see.
3) I would also like to see a vague history of this midnight showing. Maybe including when it started. (whew)
That's a good enough idea, but I bet it's already been made and deleted. Burn in hell.
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